do you realize how stupid you look. haha. you acually think that kid is me? look at his sign on date an the date i signed on to new grounds. theres more than a year's difference. if i think your shit sucks and i want to write a review... i wont be affraid to do it to your face. at least i know now why you were a douche in the message you sent me. its sad.
you should try to finger pick the background melody in a descending order. could give it more of a ominous feel. too short though i was expecting it to go somewhere else when it ended. write more of it.